I love...

Barroom HeroBarroom Hero Posts: 76
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I love the perfume
of her sultry breath.

I caress the neck,
addictive as meth.

Sensual purpose
in my flaming heart

That overcomes my sense
and keeps us apart.
Liberal Douchebags that Blame Bush for Everything are Useless Pieces of Trash. I Shit on You.
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Originally posted by Barroom Hero
    I love the perfume
    of her sultry breath.

    I caress the neck,
    addictive as meth.

    Sensual purpose
    in my flaming heart

    That overcomes my sense
    and keeps us apart.

    r u coming on too strong? been there myself when the sultry ones come around..
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • Originally posted by olderman
    r u coming on too strong? been there myself when the sultry ones come around..

    Exactly the point of that poem!

    Yeah, sometimes women sense when a guy is coming on too strong and they shy away from him. It must be instinctive!
    Liberal Douchebags that Blame Bush for Everything are Useless Pieces of Trash. I Shit on You.
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Originally posted by Barroom Hero
    Exactly the point of that poem!

    Yeah, sometimes women sense when a guy is coming on too strong and they shy away from him. It must be instinctive!

    it's difficult to hold back, beeeeeleeeeeve meeee!!

    however, from experience, i have found many women are turned on by the "slow" come on.. much like the slow, hard rock climb on a sheer cliff.... hehehe just my observation, not trying to give any kind of wise old sage advice.. do whatcha gotta do
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    it's teh sexxay.......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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