fly away

keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
this will breed but i will never recover
i will get tenfold but never discover
how stupid it is in a modern world
where saving is turned over into
saving for comfort

i will outrun it you can bet but don't bet
the ink i create from this poetry death
let fly away my love is your gift
but a gift is an obnoxious
way for me to live


sound like one i wrote a few years ago when
i was still stupid

hahahhahahahahhaaa

me riot
convicted
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  • yo lock this hey

    that's cool but i gave it away

    i'm not crying i feel no pain

    everything i feel it always sounds

    the same

    and it's never good enough for the music

    and it never feels as good as hers

    love love love
    convicted
  • ya know i changed my mind this is pretty good

    is there any way to keep it here while i take a nap

    i'm so tired i will steal it back when my body gets the water

    and my brain gets the knowledge





    "ya know that poem really ain't that bad"
    convicted
  • whatever i say while looking out from a top this cliff
    i will be like a dramatic shakespeare who can't get enough
    attention hey here i am

    if you come back to me and say hello then i could open
    up all the doors that i've closed who knows everyone
    here will sacrifice or else i'd be gone

    hey here i am i found the salt shove it in the face of all
    that is wrong and breed to believe in love that never dies
    or gives up

    i'm a believer a beliver in love
    hey attention here i am
    convicted
  • the light of the day awakens my pain
    i'm happy when i can feel how i do
    my only worry for the time of lay
    is to plan my escape out of the bed
    and into what lies ahead

    and if i stay strong the whole day through
    then maybe i might get to see you

    stagger to the mirrior disect the eyes
    make myself up as best that i can
    usually i can tell the pace of my dying
    but sometimes i feel so good that
    i don't even know who i am

    remember lover who says water is key
    drop a shake a vitamin and save a few animals
    i try hard to equalize the facts between us
    cause i grew up saving less than i do now

    and if i stay strong enough the whole day through
    then maybe i might get to see you

    later on and stuff

    my mind and heart start to think about jesus
    rack my brain how do i put it in for perfection
    i think about islam i think about israel
    i think about the doctor and the native massacre
    i think about the pledge and how beautiful it sounds
    but the deeper i get the further i go down

    and all that matters to me
    is staying strong the whole day through
    to maybe spend a little time with you
    convicted
  • Originally posted by keven 33
    the light of the day awakens my pain
    i'm happy when i can feel how i do
    my only worry for the time of lay
    is to plan my escape out of the bed
    and into what lies ahead

    and if i stay strong the whole day through
    then maybe i might get to see you

    stagger to the mirrior disect the eyes
    make myself up as best that i can
    usually i can tell the pace of my dying
    but sometimes i feel so good that
    i don't even know who i am

    remember lover who says water is key
    drop a shake a vitamin and save a few animals
    i try hard to equalize the facts between us
    cause i grew up saving less than i do now

    and if i stay strong enough the whole day through
    then maybe i might get to see you

    later on and stuff

    my mind and heart start to think about jesus
    rack my brain how do i put it in for perfection
    i think about islam i think about israel
    i think about the doctor and the native massacre
    i think about the pledge and how beautiful it sounds
    but the deeper i get the further i go down

    and all that matters to me
    is staying strong the whole day through
    to maybe spend a little time with you

    I like! Very much!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • i think that one is going on the record but i'm not sure which record heck i found the poem in the garbage it probably needs to be on every album
    convicted
  • i wrote one about a burrito the other day

    it's gone

    i can't go on
    convicted
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