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a theory of an alcoholic

keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i was thinking that there's probably
alot of good poetry here that is free
yet no one will read it
until it is sold
convicted
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    Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Ah yes but I've yet to sell my soul!

    But the devil she's a waiting, keeps calling me on the phone, the price is never right you see. Why won't that bitch just leave me alone?
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    i like my words over yours cause i was talking of the
    reader instead of the feeder

    kind of like a metaphor for geeze the poetry
    is so loving around here
    convicted
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    Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I like all words-I also like how people think they know what you mean by what you say-even though they don't have a clue.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    it's also wierd i study skitsophrenia and
    they break down words cause they brain is fried
    but you know i've been finding that a lot of people
    suffer from this and then some prosper

    either way i'm all shook up and off to make
    yet another jesus tune for my future box set titled
    love vs war
    look for it on invisible records
    convicted
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    keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    blind then but not now
    come back

    wide open full of love
    come back

    begging here
    i will be alright tomorrow

    in a movie kind of like wyatt earp
    when the good guys get fucked

    waiting on you
    to blow up the camera
    waiting for you
    to bring that good guy back to life
    come back
    convicted
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    i forgeti forget Posts: 281
    Originally posted by keven 33
    blind then but not now
    come back

    wide open full of love
    come back

    begging here
    i will be alright tomorrow

    in a movie kind of like wyatt earp
    when the good guys get fucked

    waiting on you
    to blow up the camera
    waiting for you
    to bring that good guy back to life
    come back
    Your poetry's awesome.
    I dig it, man.
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