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a new one for all you crazy

keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
sucks

this is for anyone that pj loves more than me


i hate you

you die

the end






































tell me if this is a good poem


























jesus forhive me my sins amen
convicted
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  • PJammin'PJammin' Posts: 1,902
    straight, to the point, and U sure got your feelings out. *golf clap*
    I died. I died and you just stood there. I died and you watched. I died and you walked by and said no. I'm dead.
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    your poem makes no sense to me
    mr. mcgee
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