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retirement poem

keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
evrytime i start to jam they run
im in hell
thirty years ugly
now i can jam
they run away
they never stay
i suppose if they did
then id pretty much be him
but they never do

i must be dead
i must have died
cause they never stay
not even my child
not even my child


a dead man my friend
convicted
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    mousejammousejam Posts: 6
    wow. can't tell if it was a drunk composition or just freestylie
    kinda down sounding..
    ..."McCready played on, lending credence to the theory that he was actually built in Stone’s basement from spare truck parts and vinyl records."... - Glide Magazine review of MSG 7/8/03
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    loveandrew-woodloveandrew-wood Posts: 131
    sounds like you need to be makin some lovin keven


    honey you should try a suicide hotline if you need to pm me or even call a church

    if you ever alone a church can help you and if the first one doesnt call another one, im not sayin you have to be christian to feel better i just know from experience that the church could offer a step in a better direction


    i love you keven
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