lost love...

Bar JamBar Jam Posts: 42
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i look into the night as it has fallen
my heart fills with emptyness from tears of sadness
stars to shine but not towards me
the feeling of empathy shadows my movements
the wind gently winces by my ear
forgive me my love as I have cried many nights
the touch of you gives me joy
then I awake to find nothing as you are gone
my heart looks back into the night wondering...wondering
my life is everchanging as the skies shimmer with intimacy
i begin everyday like the last moving on thinking of you
what happen my heart asks
the night is shinning with glows of dust
as our lives together have become a memory
i miss you very much as i try to engage on a new beginning
as being alone with the night makes me feel small
once again i fall asleep thinking how i lost you
never again to feel you against me
ohh how I wonder what has become
as my interself looks to the dark of the night
guessing...wondering...crying...
that our last day together was a night of shinning stars
I dont know what to say...but hello:)
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  • fukdupfukdup Posts: 14
    i got to live more the other day..i saw her on my way out..she asked my why i got so mad it was like she knew me..her eyes didn't really meet mine so much but i felt her so strong i wouldn't have even had to look
    she told me she was abused and she just found out what being taken advantage of is..
    she told me that it's not all bad though...made me say it to her..yeah it's not that bad is it..no need for extra pain.
    she told me her firend gretchen helped her eat again..and helped her find her soul..
    she said cause when you find your soul you have a reason to live! SHE YELLED it at me
    but now i'll remember that
    we crossed the hill together and she thanked me for being open to her and listening..she said not everyone she meets gives her goodenss in return..she wished me safety and comfort wherever i might find myself in this life..
    today i find myself alive..and that's the sweetest gift ...thanks to that angel..if i was too human to tell her..i hope she knows somehow.. sometime ..someway
    she saved a life that day
  • Bar JamBar Jam Posts: 42
    very deep and emotional, thank you for posting my name is joe;)
    I dont know what to say...but hello:)
  • pearl_bugpearl_bug Posts: 22
    fukdup,maybe she knows.
    I was alone
    I took a ride
    I didn't know
    What I would
    Find there.
  • Bar JamBar Jam Posts: 42
    she probably does...

    when I leave your side
    i must say goodbye
    when you leave my heart
    my feelings begin to fall apart
    please say hello, when you can
    my love hurts
    so please be kind
    as my heart is now become sand
    I dont know what to say...but hello:)
  • fukdupfukdup Posts: 14
    you'll say no.... but it'll follow you home
    you'll ask if you can keep it...even though they'll say no
    you know it doesn't matter it knows the way...every way..all the ways there are
    it can see through the universe..it can feel through all souls
    it's obstacles are ignorance and material life
    you want it so bad...hold you close and warm...rock you to sleep
    hum your favorite tune ..breathes life to your heart
    all the good you've ever felt...ever wished for...this transparent vibe..the music inside..
    frustration in physical manifestations of this..others harbour it..hold it away when we want it...evil game
    so good....so bad....
    when you think you can't go on...
    love survives
    couldn't lose it if you tried
  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    Originally posted by fukdup

    all the good you've ever felt...ever wished for...this transparent vibe..the music inside..
    frustration in physical manifestations of this..others harbour it..hold it away when we want it...evil game
    so good....so bad....
    when you think you can't go on...
    love survives
    couldn't lose it if you tried

    this is absolute truth-the torturous evil game i know so well.

    nobody will ever know it like i do-and yet there is still love.

    so what's wrong with loving nothing at all? or everything?

    we are so greedy with our love.
  • pearl_bugpearl_bug Posts: 22
    Sometimes you would like to lose love. You are right. You can't lose love.
    I was alone
    I took a ride
    I didn't know
    What I would
    Find there.
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