silence

auslistener1auslistener1 Posts: 59
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
lying alone, holding up the fort
for the peace of the world.
one damaged soul to save the rest,
one life stagnating, others are moving on,
suffering in silence.

he sits surrounded, in a full room to the others,
but its empty with him.
at a table alone with his thoughts, all he has left,
his thoughts still hope.

and his eyes long to see hers again,
his hands ache to touch her again,
his lips yearn to kiss her again,
his heart wishes,
but he lies alone at night, suffering in silence.

days pass for him, time passes,
though every hour becomes an eternity.
his thoughts begin to haunt him,
the thoughts he once held onto, wont leave him alone.
haunts his dreams, haunts his waking hours...
but all he needs is a moment with her,
just to keep on living for another day. keep ok.

though he knows the sun will rise, it has forever, reliable,
he counts on it. he needs it.
light him out of hell.

but for now, he lies alone, suffering in silence.
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Comments

  • wow very good auslistener i didn't know you were a poet!
    The wind is blowing cold
    Have we lost our way tonight?
    Have we lost our hope to sorrow?

    Feels like were all alone
    Running further from what’s right
    And there are no more heroes to follow

    So what are we becoming?
    Where did we go wrong?
  • i guess im not really...but some crap thats in my life at the moment, got me writing...

    : )...
    Originally posted by A Surprise Left
    wow very good auslistener i didn't know you were a poet!
  • yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
    this is really fuckin good...i can totally relate......
  • Originally posted by auslistener1
    i guess im not really...but some crap thats in my life at the moment, got me writing...

    : )...

    so you don't normally write? the best writing comes out of anger and so forth anyway.
    The wind is blowing cold
    Have we lost our way tonight?
    Have we lost our hope to sorrow?

    Feels like were all alone
    Running further from what’s right
    And there are no more heroes to follow

    So what are we becoming?
    Where did we go wrong?
  • yeah not usually. i just write when i need to.....
    last night i needed to...
    Originally posted by A Surprise Left
    so you don't normally write? the best writing comes out of anger and so forth anyway.
  • fair enough i'm a bit like except when i first started a few months ago where i was doing one every couple of days. didn't do one for a couple of months until last night. keep it up good work! hey and austlistener go hird, go lloyd and go bombers! :D
    The wind is blowing cold
    Have we lost our way tonight?
    Have we lost our hope to sorrow?

    Feels like were all alone
    Running further from what’s right
    And there are no more heroes to follow

    So what are we becoming?
    Where did we go wrong?
  • the only words that come to me are....."fuck you"

    hehe....game of the century...


    Originally posted by A Surprise Left
    hey and austlistener go hird, go lloyd and go bombers! :D
  • yeah...its something that none of us ever want to relate....but its a place thats so hard to get out of also. ive been in it for too long.
    Originally posted by yerrey
    this is really fuckin good...i can totally relate......
  • impressive. That's not a good place to be, but we all gotta go there.
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  • Originally posted by auslistener1
    the only words that come to me are....."fuck you"

    hehe....game of the century...

    hehe well that was poetic........

    great game though, went with a few friends from high school (including one west coast supporter) and it was the best fun. i don't think anything can beat it for game of the season. i thought you were going to lose by 100 points there in that first quarter, then it seemed you were going to steamroll us. hehe if lloyd didn't get off you would have run! :)
    The wind is blowing cold
    Have we lost our way tonight?
    Have we lost our hope to sorrow?

    Feels like were all alone
    Running further from what’s right
    And there are no more heroes to follow

    So what are we becoming?
    Where did we go wrong?
  • i wonder how much sheedy paid off the tribunal last week...
    Originally posted by A Surprise Left
    hehe well that was poetic........

    great game though, went with a few friends from high school (including one west coast supporter) and it was the best fun. i don't think anything can beat it for game of the season. i thought you were going to lose by 100 points there in that first quarter, then it seemed you were going to steamroll us. hehe if lloyd didn't get off you would have run! :)
  • Originally posted by auslistener1
    i wonder how much sheedy paid off the tribunal last week...

    i think he paid off those martians......seriously the umpiring during the game (for both sides) was deplorable IMHO, some of the decisions left me scratching my head. you guys have a gun midfield, but no forward or back line. you had philip matera matched by dustin fletcher, just about saids it all.
    The wind is blowing cold
    Have we lost our way tonight?
    Have we lost our hope to sorrow?

    Feels like were all alone
    Running further from what’s right
    And there are no more heroes to follow

    So what are we becoming?
    Where did we go wrong?
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