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The Sky
olderman
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Plastered against the sky,
Clouds are vacant,
As my father rages against the losing battle with the LIGHT,
And I seek comfort...
Found in a song...
ALIVE
Clouds are vacant,
As my father rages against the losing battle with the LIGHT,
And I seek comfort...
Found in a song...
ALIVE
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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what can we women do
to make it
right?
Please extrapolate... I know not what you are spouting about..
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
But it would seem to me that lately there have been
alot how shall I say? I'm not sure, but for a brief moment
it seems that so many men are bent out of shape all
of the time, and the women are too. This just leaves us
all alone feeling broken...And it is someones fault! People
don't feel like crap for no reason, so it gets to me, what
did we do or do we do that is so bad or wrong to hurt so
much all of the time?! It makes me ask what can we do to
fix it? To stop it to prevent it? Thats all, your poem made
me address an ongoing issue- for you seem to be asking
what is the problem? Shall I mind my own business?
OH by the way, I like your poem alot. Very cool.
taken to much
momentum gains
catches bullets
years pass strenght gained
angel makes a fool of the officer
with the key to the cage
rage inside if it gets out
watch out run and hide
hahhahha this is hilarious
if i could reach out and grab you by the throat
id never let go
jesus forgive me sins amen
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
the minute i heard Alive
i KNEW
in all my pregnant embarassment
that my love was still Alive
I had married the wrong one
at the right time to make another
but in that voice
a battle of love
began
i put on my doc martins
walked out the door
and walked many years to
yours
i have always
want ed
an
olderman
my mom will be thrilled.
thanks. i liked is so much! you will never know how much!
most likely when the beautiful ones finnaly get to be the fake political figures we will probably see that they to are sinners as well and capable of war
maybe not
seems we never tried it though
i admit it when i get on the computer im dangerous
lovelovelove
a trace or a wisp of your smile
the flavor of salt and brass mouthpieces mixed with
my knowing for certain
you're not coming back
and i could have cried if i just had the time
but my day was already so full
yes, i could have cried
if i weren't so sure
that it all goes by and it always will
sorry bout your da, olderman...