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Freely Spoken

oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i'll be open
freely spoken
common words
summon swords
to battle
for the good of all
with a trace
of advantage
for you and i and all mankind... some die...

i know not yet what it is
and i am waiting for an answer

since long ago
my brother
came home
lost for words
freely spoken
wounds open

and yet closed
to all who loved him

he will never be well
and so it is that i know his hell
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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  • Morbid PoetMorbid Poet Posts: 24
    that was nicce

    stop me if i sound like an ass, but by any chance is that about a war?
    its a bisexual thing

    I moved from the 9th to the 8th circle of hell. Before you know it I will be living in the first cirlce and I will own you.

    Just say NO to Bush.

    Vote Kerry! Save your freedom of speech and other various frredoms!

  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Originally posted by Morbid Poet
    that was nicce

    stop me if i sound like an ass, but by any chance is that about a war?

    war & peace & insanity & love
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • stewardessstewardess Posts: 6
    since long ago
    my brother
    came home
    lost for words
    freely spoken
    wounds open


    this was so simple and powerful, really nice
    peace & love
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Originally posted by stewardess
    since long ago
    my brother
    came home
    lost for words
    freely spoken
    wounds open


    this was so simple and powerful, really nice

    ty stew
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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