contemplationextentarianism

oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
i made up a word
to describe this fucked up world
of savage terror
of sadisim gone fad....

i'd rather be held in low regard
than to strike you
i neither imagine myself as you
nor you as me

and if california slides into the ocean
and sinks to the bottom of hell
sing the whistle
singe the earth
sting til it hurts
sling shot rockets
in hellish fires
crock of shit
she will say

i say she was wrong
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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Comments

  • VERY intense
    and emotionful olderman

    Edit : check ur pm :p

    im gonna have to go throught this a few more times ;)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • Damned fine poem, olderman.
  • You my friend are the master!

    Change your username to "wiserman"

    How do we top that?
  • I whole-heartedly agree with these folks! Excellent! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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