someone who has touched me .. my short poem for a lovely lady

oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
summer's forgotten bloom
bright and lusterly in the swell
clustered mist ahh musk is it?
moistureness slickly glides me
thoroughly spent is I as
she's a one,
she's the one..
sweetest jeeeezussss,
i am home
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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Comments

  • very nice olderman. I like this one a lot.
    Very lucky lady
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Originally posted by PJfaninmaine
    very nice olderman. I like this one a lot.
    Very lucky lady

    Yes, very lucky
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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