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i listened to myself

oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
edited October 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i listened to myself today,
a cautioned heresy

i listened and i followed
myself to a place i found inside..

a peace i found

freedom from hate

i wish you were here

my brother

i forgive you now
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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  • wolfbearwolfbear Posts: 3,965
    Nice. :)
    "I'd rather be with an animal." "Those that can be trusted can change their mind." "The in between is mine." "If I don't lose control, explore and not explode, a preternatural other plane with the power to maintain." "Yeh this is living." "Life is what you make it."
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,279
    Olderman, I haven't read from you in a while! It's nice to read your words again :)
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
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  • Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    olderman wrote:
    i listened to myself today,
    a cautioned heresy

    i listened and i followed
    myself to a place i found inside..

    a peace i found

    freedom from hate

    i wish you were here

    my brother

    i forgive you now



    very nice... very nice......
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
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