somethin sum such

oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
edited February 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The story we concocted to make ever one feel better about our split shut xplodzhun.. Fustic foam future’s above and delicately sunk as the ignorant duck makes a mucking mess in the sights of the gun.crumb
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    future's above
    but in the past he's slow and sinking
    and he who forgets
    will be destined to remember
    oh oh oh
    nothingman..................



    i love you, olderman ;;)

    and this is a really cool piece

    i read it, and when the last word rolls off my lips i wanna add "SMACK!!" cuz it snaps at'cha like that...

    very tight
    mmh! love it!
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