lovers and kisses

oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
edited February 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
So some one stole your heart tonite
And anger steals your soul,
All along some watch tower
Of power,
Inside is a beautiful soul

I’d like to make it better, yet -
As strangers we must know,
Inside is the witching glower,
Love’s hour
Inside our shared love’s soul
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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Comments

  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    wow....

    nice piece, m'dear
    i like the insight
  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    all killer- no filler

    Me likes
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    very nice j. very nice indeed. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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