Spooky
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working on it anyway..
From a late night hour this song gone wrong and a song gone straight to hell
I climb to the top of a ladder straddled on a shelf of empty books
Carefree is my only way to flip amongst the bile
Laughter confronts all of us who sit atop this pile
To an early morning songbird song and a song’s sad whistled tale
I stumble down this stairway of stale basement’s empty nooks
As Sycophants want me to praise the way they spit so vile
Tragedy confronts us all near the bottom of this pile
In the middle of a nightmare
Awakened, the black stare
Of an ever present miscreant
Please shake me to elsewhere
... 2 b cont
if i ever wake up
and i reserve the right to copy/edit
it's the hardest button to button
From a late night hour this song gone wrong and a song gone straight to hell
I climb to the top of a ladder straddled on a shelf of empty books
Carefree is my only way to flip amongst the bile
Laughter confronts all of us who sit atop this pile
To an early morning songbird song and a song’s sad whistled tale
I stumble down this stairway of stale basement’s empty nooks
As Sycophants want me to praise the way they spit so vile
Tragedy confronts us all near the bottom of this pile
In the middle of a nightmare
Awakened, the black stare
Of an ever present miscreant
Please shake me to elsewhere
... 2 b cont
if i ever wake up
and i reserve the right to copy/edit
it's the hardest button to button
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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I like the imagery you've created throughout. the lines above instantly create an image we have all experienced.