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everybodys poem...

unlincedunlinced Posts: 21
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
let's all write one line and see what we come up with...i'll start..



by monday, the rain had pled it's case
...well i guess there's nothing wong with what you say...
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    scat catscat cat Posts: 27
    I wonder what it meant, and wipe the smile off my face
    Become a vehicle that blossoms truth and freedom
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    alluneedisluv5alluneedisluv5 Posts: 15
    this city is so dependant on mace
    "There's just one thing that I still believe and it's love..."
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    nocode198nocode198 Posts: 125
    we are all apart of the human race
    'Fox hunting is barbaric, the people who do it are a bunch of snobby tories with stupid posh accents. Oh damn, i didn't say that - damn, what a giveaway...'
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    sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    we silence eachother and slow our pace
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
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    ^rubyinthedust^^rubyinthedust^ Posts: 53
    (i'm a novice so bear with me) :)


    we silence eachother and slow our pace ...

    cont'd...

    allowing the ability to seek what is out of place
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    GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    why is everyone obsessed with rhyming words in poetry
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    sultryeveningsultryevening Posts: 522
    Originally posted by Goulet
    why is everyone obsessed with rhyming words in poetry

    maybe its just part of their poetic bardolatry!
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
    Newcastle-Riverside 02/22/92!!!
    E.rutherford New Jersey 01/06/06
    Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
    Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
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    keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    by tuesday the rain had become my face



    sorry i only read the top post and not the replies
    so im probably a little behind this poem
    its probably like saturday or something and im
    on tuesday
    convicted
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    keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    by monday i thought of a song
    my fingers to tired to play along
    with the beating of heart inside
    my mind
    i decided to die instead

    watchers closed eyes i resurrect me
    to instill the love i was born to be
    with a queen in a movie
    but real eternally

    now thats quite a big ego
    if you ask me
    convicted
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