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unlinced
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the snow is going to miss us
like i miss the way you stand when the sun is in your eyes
as if it can't burn you
with it's been there done that light
if you grew an inch in my presence
i'd run around in mock delight
tongue open
if only to catch a piece of you
to draw myself a picture of possession
sprung low, hands in your pocket
toes poised to pounce
my gift of oh? your gift of no.
in a snowflake
like i miss the way you stand when the sun is in your eyes
as if it can't burn you
with it's been there done that light
if you grew an inch in my presence
i'd run around in mock delight
tongue open
if only to catch a piece of you
to draw myself a picture of possession
sprung low, hands in your pocket
toes poised to pounce
my gift of oh? your gift of no.
in a snowflake
...well i guess there's nothing wong with what you say...
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oh, we were probably being denied the whole time and we were probably blinded by our wishes to the otherwise, but it doesn't change the fact that they came armed to us one day and the bullet's impact at point blank range will never be forgotten.
unlinced has accomplished what I cannot, and that is a poignant poem in under 15 lines LOL.
nice work.
seta