long time no do

shareshare Posts: 551
I sea



a whispered voice caresses her ear
familiar, yet not known
cool cotton brushes a cheek
as she turns to receive the thought
well travelled, refracted by star
placed so long ago, tiny shine
a beacon
an echo
a message
a smile

it's time, she thinks
time to listen
time to here
we're all sentient snowflakes
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I'm a number that doesn't count
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the nothing ventured - the nothing feigned
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    beautiful iful iful iful
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I wanted to say jus 'beautiful' but the ten characters....in search of a moderator.....but then when I thought about it......I think it's like gossamer.....the poem.......beautiful like gossamer......:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    delicate like gossamer.....did you know the etymology of gossamer.....it comes from 'goose summer' St Martin's summer ie. early November when geese were eaten, and there was a lot of gossamer or those enchanting spiders' webs......but I jus think this peom is fresh and delicate......like a spring salad......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • shareshare Posts: 551
    thank you

    gossamer

    i like that

    a little "do" in the webs
    we're all sentient snowflakes
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I'm a number that doesn't count
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    the nothing ventured - the nothing feigned
  • shareshare Posts: 551
    that should be web

    i never noticed you can't edit

    time to take more time

    hmmmm

    :)
    we're all sentient snowflakes
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I'm a number that doesn't count
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    the nothing ventured - the nothing feigned
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I know mare is sea....but what's 'imbrium' is it drink like imbibe....?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this. :)
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  • shareshare Posts: 551
    ISN wrote:
    I know mare is sea....but what's 'imbrium' is it drink like imbibe....?

    it's sea of rains

    it's a crater on the moon - near plato - :)

    it's also the title of a poem I wrote a long time ago and i always just
    liked the way it sounded - i've always had a moon thing

    thanks guys

    i used to post poems here all the time and
    kind of stopped for a couple of years - you've made it nice
    for me
    we're all sentient snowflakes
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I'm a number that doesn't count
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    the nothing ventured - the nothing feigned
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    a whispered voice caresses her ear

    this itself is beautiful!

    -Nast
    The king of run on sentences...
  • Nast wrote:
    this itself is beautiful!

    -Nast

    it only pales in comparison to the poet's beauty.
    This is the best I could come up with.
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