light fall

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edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
can you fold from sadness
can you bend, and double
and reel
is it real?
once a thought in the sky
(a tender push placed it there)
it still sits, her beacon
casting shadows on her dream
and does it reach and touch
like fingertips, a brush so light
a stroke, the picture
and when she sleeps an answer

and the wish still remains
and the sky still holds true
and the night, with eyes closed
bring the whispered hello
we're all sentient snowflakes
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I'm a number that doesn't count
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the nothing ventured - the nothing feigned
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  • kdpjam
    kdpjam Posts: 2,303
    good stuff.;}
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • St.KittsAP
    St.KittsAP Posts: 24
    share, this piece is wonderfully sad. every word fits so well.

    it's got a Downie-like crypticness/odd-familiarity to it and that's obviously a very good thing when it comes whatever "good art" is.
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    you write beautiful things, share
    always my pleasure to read


    Rachel
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    wonderful piece
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key

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