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carpenter_newtoncarpenter_newton Posts: 71
edited April 2016 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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i suggest you step out on your porch
run away my son...see it all...oh see the world
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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    mmmm listingggggg
    i like that.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    mmmm listingggggg
    i like that.

    Indeed! I don't see many list poems...they're tough to pull off and make effectively. Kudos! Very nice!
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  • A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    Great poem...No fucking around..Right down to the point
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • carpenter_newtoncarpenter_newton Posts: 71
    edited April 2016
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    Post edited by carpenter_newton on
    i suggest you step out on your porch
    run away my son...see it all...oh see the world
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