07 august 2005

trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
swarm me
stop me
steal my eyes
i swallowed the seeds
of someone else's song -

at the end of the day
i get so tired
walking so long
trying to catch you
when you're running away -
I'll dig a tunnel
from my window to yours
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  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    i like this. i think u should add more! ;)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • kdpjam wrote:
    i like this. i think u should add more! ;)


    i agree.. could go either way.. happy or sad, rough to glad, it is a great beginning in my opinion.
    change begins with discontent.
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