03 December 2006

trappedinmyradio
trappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
edited December 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
my summer dock took a walk for the winter
a muzzle flash and it went away so fast


this was something that i really just liked...and, then, i got bad new and the second line came from that...this is all i have...to me, it means so much and it hurts so badly.
I'll dig a tunnel
from my window to yours
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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    :(

    What's a muzzle flash?
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  • trappedinmyradio
    trappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    my summer dock took a walk for the winter
    a muzzle flash and it went away so fast
    you came along and knocked the dust
    off our tired hair and offered a hat in exchange
    with a wide brim and a stove pipe top to shine
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • trappedinmyradio
    trappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    you came along and knocked the dust
    off our tired hair and offered a hat in exchange
    with a wide brim and a stove pipe top to shine
    my summer dock took a walk for the winter
    a muzzle flash and it went away so fast

    and all that was left were questions.

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    a muzzle flash is he flash from the barrel of a gun...
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • trappedinmyradio
    trappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    and, i hate that they turned off the editing function...so FUCKING annoying...
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    trappedinmyradio wrote:

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    a muzzle flash is he flash from the barrel of a gun...

    Oh, I'm not familiar with guns so I wouldn't have thought of that. Thanks for the explanation. :)
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  • trappedinmyradio
    trappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    justam wrote:
    Oh, I'm not familiar with guns so I wouldn't have thought of that. Thanks for the explanation. :)

    unforunately, i know too much about guns...
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • Perceptual
    Perceptual Posts: 200
    There is no such thing as knowing too much about guns.

    Good start. I like it much. Keep up the good flow of creativity, friend.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.

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