Soon it will all be over:

mccreadyisgodmccreadyisgod Posts: 6,395
edited April 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
And we'll wonder if the ticket
Was worth the price of admission
As soon as we find the car.

The rides were nice, and the prizes were fine:

And the photo booth in the corner
Behind the cotton candy stand
Proves we were here.

And I'll keep the pictures in a box:

With the crumpled tickets
And your old school ID
And a letter you sent me once.

In the morning, I'll smell carnival in your hair:

Sawdust and barnyard animals
Freshly mown grass
And a hint of stale beer.

Soon it will all be over:

And I will dream of something else
Besides the ferris wheel and corn dogs
And cotton candy on your breath.
...and if you don't like it, you can suck on an egg.
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  • mccreadyisgodmccreadyisgod Posts: 6,395
    Quick followup that doesn't deserve it's own thread:


    I'm a Counting Crows fan, and while I consider them to be a listenable band, I've never thought their stuff was brilliant. Sometimes touching, but not brilliant. Then I was listening to their VH1 Storytellers disc (Disc 1 of Across a Wire) and the version of Round Here. One shining moment of brilliance:

    I walk in the air between the rain,
    Through myself and back again

    It's cheesy and cliche, but I love that line.
    ...and if you don't like it, you can suck on an egg.
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    i rather liked this offering as well as being a fan of the counting crowes. i think they have many moments of eloquent poignance...i'm rather fond of anna begins as a general rule and this little bit always gets me for reasons i'm not sure i understand myself:

    "every time she sneezes i believe it's love
    and oh lord, i'm not ready for this kind of thing"

    even writing the phrase makes me wonder at why it is so powerful a moment for me, maybe its the swell of the music or the urgency/tenderness in the vocal delivery that tugs at my heart every time i hear it...but nonetheless...i love the counting crows no matter what anyone else has to say about em. :D
  • Quick followup that doesn't deserve it's own thread:


    I'm a Counting Crows fan, and while I consider them to be a listenable band, I've never thought their stuff was brilliant. Sometimes touching, but not brilliant. Then I was listening to their VH1 Storytellers disc (Disc 1 of Across a Wire) and the version of Round Here. One shining moment of brilliance:

    I walk in the air between the rain,
    Through myself and back again

    It's cheesy and cliche, but I love that line.

    i'd say that VH1 storytellers made me a Crows fan. I liked them until i heard the album adn now i love them. the whole CD is good, especially round here, and your right about Round Here and taht line, amazing
    "be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

    Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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