Dream Baby Dream

footsteps38

If anyone has any feedback please let me know, Im kind of still working on it but its pretty close to what i want. Thanks in advance

With each night new
I dream a dream of you
Each night I lay down to bed
There is a picture of you swirling in my head

The picture flickers and flares
My heart does the same
The thought of being without you
I couldn’t envision that pain

Now my breath steadies and my mind begins to wander
To a sunny day in a field and you’re in my arms
Nothing feels so true, then when I am with you
I’ll keep you away, away from harm
As long as you will stay in my arms

Day turns to night, the stars begin to burn bright
The moon reflects off your eyes onto mine
Held motionless by your gaze
This must be a sign
That our days together will work out just fine

I hunger for the day, the day we exchange our vows
No longer a part, but whole I am
My only wish is a wish for you
That you love me with all that you can

Dream baby dream
Let your dreams be pure and clean
Allow your mind drift away
Knowing that I am here to stay.

Ms. Haiku

To try a different approach, which may not be the best approach, take all -ing words out, or words of the future and put them in the present tense without -ings. No dreamings of the future, but dreams.

footsteps38

Thats good i know one at one part that it will make it better. The last line instead of knowing, i will use know that i will be here to stay. Thanks

Bob