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no key

kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
edited March 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i want to know you
i want to show you
if i could walk through the door
if we could just unlock it

brief rays of sunlight you send bring a smile
wish i could feel the sunlight always
mistaken words, in our denial

why i'm standing outside is a mystery
i keep knocking to find you
you won't open to try to know me
i can't promise you could ever know me
this door that seems to have no key
lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Sometimes words so nakedly uncomplicated and free of conceit reveal simply some of the mystery of things. This is lovely.
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Sometimes words so nakedly uncomplicated and free of conceit reveal simply some of the mystery of things. This is lovely.

    thanks very much finsbury.
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
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