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mountain spirits

kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
driving through mountains,
there's the blue smoky haze,
where spirits are free

almost there i smile,
a certain calm comes over me
not unlike a feeling
that i'm staring out to sea

racing through the tunnels near maggie valley
to transylvania county
lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    kdpjam wrote:
    driving through mountains,
    there's the blue smoky haze,
    where spirits are free

    almost there i smile,
    a certain calm comes over me
    not unlike a feeling
    that i'm staring out to sea

    racing through the tunnels near maggie valley
    to transylvania county


    It does have a feeling similair to that you get from standing at the sea line. The smell of both is really great as well.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    each exudes a freshness of air
    freshness of spirit, of freedom
    that is like no other
    dare to compare
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Yeah, kdpjam--you hit the nail on the head with this one! I just love that feeling of freedom and connectedness with nature...This poem's just lovely! Thanks! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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