my alibi

kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
your late arrival
is right on time
now everything else
will fall in line

you make me high,
so high i can't come down
i'll meet you anywhere,
somewhere, downtown?

walking the streets
no real direction
with you i am safe
you're my true infection.

its this oblivion
with few words spoken
file us away
we'll get lost
i'm your token.

surrounded by people,
drifting through the bars
two potent drinks,
we're dark corner stars.

you reach for my hand
and stroke it inside
it feels like magic.
my sweet alibi ~

your late arrival is right on time....
lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    so sweet....I really enjoyed that one.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    thanks bu2... ;)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i like it much. :)
    think i might get me one of those sweet alibis. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    kdpjam wrote:
    your late arrival
    is right on time
    now everything else
    will fall in line

    you make me high,
    so high i can't come down
    i'll meet you anywhere,
    somewhere, downtown?

    walking the streets
    no real direction
    with you i am safe
    you're my true infection.

    its this oblivion
    with few words spoken
    file us away
    we'll get lost
    i'm your token.

    surrounded by people,
    drifting through the bars
    two potent drinks,
    we're dark corner stars.

    you reach for my hand
    and stroke it inside
    it feels like magic.
    my sweet alibi ~

    your late arrival is right on time....

    I like the subject or at least I think I do. I mean the subject I see in it, that doesn't always match the one of the writer of course. I like the words and the somewhat dark and lonely feeling it gives me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I like this one. :)
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  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    kdpjam wrote:
    your late arrival
    is right on time
    now everything else
    will fall in line

    you make me high,
    so high i can't come down
    i'll meet you anywhere,
    somewhere, downtown?

    walking the streets
    no real direction
    with you i am safe
    you're my true infection.

    its this oblivion
    with few words spoken
    file us away
    we'll get lost
    i'm your token.

    surrounded by people,
    drifting through the bars
    two potent drinks,
    we're dark corner stars.

    you reach for my hand
    and stroke it inside
    it feels like magic.
    my sweet alibi ~

    your late arrival is right on time....


    You know girl I like to be on time
    and not be late
    and leavin' you hangin'

    You'll never just a token
    never be a promise
    that all dust now n' broken

    Just what is it that we be tokin'
    and just how powerful is it
    just how potent

    If I make you high
    and make you as a spirit fly
    do we really need, an alibi

    To get us by
    to get us high
    to get us nigh

    To reach for the sky
    to make cherry cream pie
    to realease the knot, undo the tie

    To set one's soul free
    Free to be
    Needs not one, nor 2, an alibi

    Just a willingness, a longiness
    to try try try
    to kiss the sky
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    nice writing!
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • It's me!
    Friday'z Od'S form Myspace!!
    Good job!!!
    I wish I coul steal your poem and put music on it, and sing over!!!

    peace!!!
    xxxx
    Pierre

    I live in Laval, I'm looking for some musicians to make a band. Drum, bass and guitar are needed. More songs with voices can be sent on demand.
    www.myspace.com/fridayzodds
    www.myspace.com/vignesartichots
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    you're stealing my alibi? ;)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • I got an alibi ;P
    Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
    Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
    (Wolfmother)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Grand Rapids 2006
  • I totally get it.
    "If it takes my whole life, I won't break I won't bend."
    -S. McLachlan
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