the refinery

kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
no end

or start

no impression

to keep

on a day

fog transcends

& thru

an uncertain

heart puts

nervous energy

to sleep

altering thought

sadness

madness

laugh out

loud

what medicine

no choice

the voice

turned off

feelings

stepped on

enveloped

ceilings

trapped

in a cloud

anywhere

bubble

let down

there

keep away

foundation

rubble

diminished

permanence

temporary

lost definition

on the fence

blank recognition

shallow

depth going

down

an invitation

to a winery

or back to dream

where

the refinery

hopes &

schemes of

clouds with

silver lining
lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like how you made this a list that gains meaning as it gets longer. :)
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    kdpjam wrote:
    no end

    or start

    no impression

    to keep

    on a day

    fog transcends

    & thru

    an uncertain

    heart puts

    nervous energy

    to sleep

    altering thought

    sadness

    madness

    laugh out

    loud

    what medicine

    no choice

    the voice

    turned off

    feelings

    stepped on

    enveloped

    ceilings

    trapped

    in a cloud

    anywhere

    bubble

    let down

    there

    keep away

    foundation

    rubble

    diminished

    permanence

    temporary

    lost definition

    on the fence

    blank recognition

    shallow

    depth going

    down

    an invitation

    to a winery

    or back to dream

    where

    the refinery

    hopes &

    schemes of

    clouds with

    silver lining

    i like this quite a bit.
    thanks for sharing this.
    uniquely different.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    thanks ;] !!
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    more more mroe. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    i don't get it.
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