SleightOfHand562's poetry

SleightOfHand562SleightOfHand562 Posts: 477
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I've only been writing for the better part of a year, but I decided to put some of my stuff up here after deliberating over it for a while. I'll warn you right now that not a lot of it is very accessible. I just write from my personal experiences and thoughts. I write in "chapters" of sorts that I categorize by a time period in my life. Please post any thoughts or comments, and don't be afraid to criticize.



CHAPTER ONE
HERE, NATURALLY
or
UNDER THE BLUE
March --->June 2003

LOW TIDE AT THE CEREBRUM
March 2003

Waves swell and fall
In my mind, a sea of thought
High tide,
Wash away thoughts
Of parting,
I'll remain

Let the sea
Enlighten me
No one stays
But who wants to leave

Now,
As we reach out
To grasp for Atlantic glare,
Days bend and blur, still,
Time flows as we dirft away

Let the sea
Enlighten me
Blue reflects
The image goes to grey

Time is an undertow
Make the best of the wake.
There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

~Jeff Ament
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  • APRIL
    or
    LATE SNOW BLUES
    April, 2003

    Snow falls in April
    Blank as days that sleep
    The walls, the season lingers
    Paper through my fingers

    Pines reach in
    White piles on the leaves
    Bright peaks through
    The woods, the darkness weaves

    Quarter turns too slowly
    who hears the seasons moan?
    City air turns hazy
    Sky pales, paints
    Red pastels go blurry
    Frame remains, though faint

    Pines reach in
    White piles on the leaves
    Bright peaks through
    The woods, the darkness weaves
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • CHOIR BIRD
    April, 2003

    Hey,
    Did you think that life would stay and wait?
    You're not so important, so don't be late.

    Make it for yourslef.
    It's the only way this thing's gonna work.
    You're in this by yourself, so harmony is easy.

    The shade isn't much darker but the light puts a trance on you.
    Maybe because everyone else is so happy, too.

    Make it for yourslef.
    It's the only way this thing's gonna work.
    You're in this by yourself, so harmony is easy.

    The moon is draped in the integrity of a more elaborate lie.
    Reflections from a mirrorball are the eye of insight for me.

    Make it for yourslef.
    It's the only way this thing's gonna work.
    You're in this by yourself, so harmony is easy.

    There's no bad people, just bad decisions.
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • CLAY PIGEONS
    May, 2003

    It's one thing to say
    That you've got everything to lose
    It's another thing to actually lose it

    To be so high..
    What could let you down?
    To stare at the sun..
    It's a strange mistake

    These birds can only sing for so long,
    Then they break
    Clouds cloud your judgement,
    But don't let yourself down.
    Don't let yourself fall.
    You'd never hit the floor.

    But every day's the same.
    Have fun with all your friends you hate.
    If you think you're doing fine, just wait.
    All your efforts are in vain.
    Pastoral settings call your name.
    Shattering beliefs that you claim.
    We're all the same.
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Sleight of Hand...

    It is clear you listen to a lot of music, it comes across in your work.

    I like it's openness a great deal, and the first piece ....Cerebrum, is great.

    Please, continue to share.

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Originally posted by setaside2
    Sleight of Hand...

    It is clear you listen to a lot of music, it comes across in your work.

    I like it's openness a great deal, and the first piece ....Cerebrum, is great.

    Please, continue to share.

    seta

    thanks for the kind words! and yeah, music dominates pretty much every facet of my life. here's another :

    HERE, NATURALLY
    May, 2003

    There's something beautiful at the base of the wick.
    In the glint of the wood paneling.
    In the sheets comforting the sky.
    Over the highway in the evening.
    In the stipple of the ceiling.
    In the boredom that breeds the desire to fly.

    But who's to say
    If you should see it
    That you believe it can aid your day?
    Things aren't so grounded.
    You can't just feel it.
    Believe that the rain can change your ways.

    There's something inherently strange about the natural order of things.
    In the wings of a Robin at your window.
    In the traffic of a leaf already falling,
    never really failing to put on a show.

    But who's to say
    If you should see it
    That you believe it can aid your day?
    Things aren't so grounded.
    You can't just feel it.
    Believe that the rain can change your ways.

    There's something painful in grey bricks that show the ocean where you can't be.
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    LOL

    that's your OTHER best one. I dig a lot. nice.


    seta.

    don't make me change my favorite again. :p
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Originally posted by SleightOfHand562
    I've only been writing for the better part of a year, but I decided to put some of my stuff up here after deliberating over it for a while. I'll warn you right now that not a lot of it is very accessible. I just write from my personal experiences and thoughts. I write in "chapters" of sorts that I categorize by a time period in my life. Please post any thoughts or comments, and don't be afraid to criticize.



    CHAPTER ONE
    HERE, NATURALLY
    or
    UNDER THE BLUE
    March --->June 2003

    LOW TIDE AT THE CEREBRUM
    March 2003

    Waves swell and fall
    In my mind, a sea of thought
    High tide,
    Wash away thoughts
    Of parting,
    I'll remain

    Let the sea
    Enlighten me
    No one stays
    But who wants to leave

    Now,
    As we reach out
    To grasp for Atlantic glare,
    Days bend and blur, still,
    Time flows as we dirft away

    Let the sea
    Enlighten me
    Blue reflects
    The image goes to grey

    Time is an undertow
    Make the best of the wake.

    Mmmm, I really like this one too! Glad to see you've decided to make a thread! Keep 'em coming! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • thanks a lot for the kind words folks! from you two (seta and being enlightened), it means a lot and is very encouraging.

    CHOICE
    May, 2003

    The moon is a beautiful painter.
    She has a way of accenting what I can't always see.
    Reeds...
    Rustle...
    Fiery tales that I miss in the blanket.

    This is it -
    This is all I am.
    This is all we are.

    The light has been made to seem unnatural,
    But what puts us above?
    What makes us the stars?
    My palette has grown, ever still.
    At least I'd like to think so.
    If we've grown, we've done it at the same rate,
    Because sometimes every little thing looks the same...
    And sometimes, I'm in the womb again...
    Breathing and loving for the first time,
    Again.
    Again, Again, Again
    I don't fucking know...
    The only certainty is what you feel under the blue.

    The dirt road means nothing.
    the shadows cast are believable immediately,
    But contemplation makes me smile.
    Twenty to -
    Almost there...
    And from this island, I can see for miles...
    And all I see is blank...
    And it seems all too much.

    Flow...
    Ride...
    Rise...
    Enjoy these strides,
    Becuase if you don't,
    You're only a fraction of what you feel...
    Under the blue.
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • Originally posted by SleightOfHand562
    thanks a lot for the kind words folks! from you two (seta and being enlightened), it means a lot and is very encouraging.

    You're welcome and they're well deserved! :)
    The moon is a beautiful painter.

    And so is SleightOfHand562!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened

    And so is SleightOfHand562!

    :O

    text on a computer monitor has never made me blush before! thanks!
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • Originally posted by SleightOfHand562
    :O

    text on a computer monitor has never made me blush before! thanks!

    :) Where's that blushing smiley???
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    :) Where's that blushing smiley???

    this one? lol.
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • Originally posted by SleightOfHand562
    this one? lol.

    No, that's the naughty smiley! :D:o;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • seekitseekit Posts: 73
    thank you first for sharing your words, your mind........i really love choir bird.........i love the following:

    The moon is draped in the integrity of a more elaborate lie.
    Reflections from a mirrorball are the eye of insight for me.

    I believe I have felt the same............thank u, thank u...
    Seek It
  • Originally posted by seekit
    thank you first for sharing your words, your mind........i really love choir bird.........i love the following:

    The moon is draped in the integrity of a more elaborate lie.
    Reflections from a mirrorball are the eye of insight for me.

    I believe I have felt the same............thank u, thank u...

    I just wanna say that all the thanks I've gotten for sharing my stuff has really made me happy. You are all such lovely people and if it weren't for your incredible poetry, I never would have bothered posting MY life story. Thank you jamily.
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • DEPTH
    May, 2003


    Everything you believe is wrong...
    To someone else who's just as lost.
    Your head is so filled...
    With misconceptions of what you want.
    Discover what you've tossed away.
    Embrace what you thought you knew.

    There's so much beauty...
    If you know where to look.
    The problem is you're just too tired.
    You're playing with your pens...
    so it's become an ink spill.

    Well, everyone has options.
    nobody sees the ones that they create.
    The weight will fall.
    Push us into knowledge.
    Submissive natured beings.
    Don't let it brush off on you.

    It's overdone,
    but you're so misled...
    To another belief...
    A dead sun.
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • CLARITY (AIMEE)
    May, 2003

    What gives us the chemistry?
    The pedestal we trust?
    To put yourself upon it,
    This book goes over the frost.

    But just for your hair to flow...
    Gently over me...
    To give more life than presence...
    It's a beautiful thing to see.

    We're so far away...
    So why do I feel so close?
    You're smile can make a calm...
    A sorrowful force.

    Cynical notions are shattered...
    By a bead and a brow.
    A kind offer, a thanks, a sparkle....
    it's all takes to wanna grow.
    To be part of the web,
    Disjointed and thin.
    Pessimistic notions dissapear...
    With a bright light grin.

    To make me see...
    What's important as sparrows free..
    Past cliches and sardonic last rights,
    To be...
    To be...
    To be...
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • Originally posted by SleightOfHand562
    To be...

    ...or not to be?, that is the question. :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • i agree- u have a gift. wish i could write like that dammit hehehe
    and so castles made of sand fall in the sea eventually...
  • seekitseekit Posts: 73
    when u gonna post more stuff?
    Seek It
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