A Prosaic Stanger
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(I put a little PJ spin on this, so i cannot take FULL credit for the words...)
All five horizons revolved around my soul,
Wondering if this life will take its toll.
Simply put, I cannot accept myself,
Gleaming in the darkness like a medallion on a shelf.
So I sit here and wonder how life is going to be,
Waiting ... Watching ... as the currents of life surround me.
I cannot find the candle of thought to light up my name,
In the shadows of life I feel empty, so I remain.
Everywhere I turned contented faces surrounded me,
But that could not prevent me to hesitate and see,
That even though some circumstances can be hard to tell,
I will make my way through one more luminous day in hell.
Jeremy Brooks Fefel
All five horizons revolved around my soul,
Wondering if this life will take its toll.
Simply put, I cannot accept myself,
Gleaming in the darkness like a medallion on a shelf.
So I sit here and wonder how life is going to be,
Waiting ... Watching ... as the currents of life surround me.
I cannot find the candle of thought to light up my name,
In the shadows of life I feel empty, so I remain.
Everywhere I turned contented faces surrounded me,
But that could not prevent me to hesitate and see,
That even though some circumstances can be hard to tell,
I will make my way through one more luminous day in hell.
Jeremy Brooks Fefel
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Very deep!!!! Good job Brooks...hahahahaha!
NJ 8/28 & 8/29/98
NJ 9/1 & 9/2/00
PA 4/28/03
NJ 7/5 & 7/6/03
NY 7/8/03
PA 7/12/03
PA 10/1/04
DC 10/11/04
NJ 9/30 & 10/1/05
PA 10/3/05
NJ 5/27 & 5/28/06
DC 5/30/06
NJ 6/1 & 6/3/06
WA 7/22 & 7/23/06
IL 8/5/07
NJ 6/19 & 6/20/08
DC 6/22/08
NY 6/24 & 6/25/08
NY 7/1/08
PA 10/27, 10/28, 10/30 & 10/31/09
all4
I wouldn't think that it is
NJ 8/28 & 8/29/98
NJ 9/1 & 9/2/00
PA 4/28/03
NJ 7/5 & 7/6/03
NY 7/8/03
PA 7/12/03
PA 10/1/04
DC 10/11/04
NJ 9/30 & 10/1/05
PA 10/3/05
NJ 5/27 & 5/28/06
DC 5/30/06
NJ 6/1 & 6/3/06
WA 7/22 & 7/23/06
IL 8/5/07
NJ 6/19 & 6/20/08
DC 6/22/08
NY 6/24 & 6/25/08
NY 7/1/08
PA 10/27, 10/28, 10/30 & 10/31/09
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
all4