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ramble, what if

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited July 2016 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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  • electronblueelectronblue Posts: 3,463
    awesomeness, justam....and ty for sharing these writing gems...~

    <3<3<3
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    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    eddie's Tone rocks wrote:
    awesomeness, justam....and ty for sharing these writing gems...~

    <3<3<3

    :)

    <3
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  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    justam wrote:
    What if everyone is wrong as a whole but right about their own part?
    what if truth is always spread out in small pieces to everyone?
    A has this sack of something bright,
    B has the back bit,
    one corner is held by C
    a dot of color is in D's closet
    and E saw something in that green drawer!
    F and G see glimpses like fireflies at night...
    all over the world, the small breathing crystals reside
    sparkling, glowing, hinting, whispering
    no one adventurer with the whole truth, everyone with some of it
    what if people shared their own pieces?
    or, even simply talked about them?
    maybe it would help Mankind?
    yes, a big M is necessary
    the whole species taking notes about parts?
    like scientific collections and sketches, but about feelings?
    groups on the hunt for elusive treasure holding some pirate's map
    or, maybe it's the search that is meant to keep us all alive
    and curious to go on?
    maybe no one is meant to see the big picture?
    and,
    what if everyone talked openly instead of guarding their truth?

    I specially love the final line.
    Maybe just because I tend to be so guarded. :p
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Buru wrote:
    I specially love the final line.
    Maybe just because I tend to be so guarded. :p

    Well, I think most people are in this case. They hold close to themselves the real bits of truth they find.

    I really think the world would be different if people talked about the stuff they've learned and hold in the darkest corners of their hearts.
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  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    justam wrote:
    Well, I think most people are in this case. They hold close to themselves the real bits of truth they find.

    I really think the world would be different if people talked about the stuff they've learned and hold in the darkest corners of their hearts.

    I think so too. Now, If I could just talk about it. :p
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Buru wrote:
    I think so too. Now, If I could just talk about it. :p

    :D
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  • collectedsoulcollectedsoul Posts: 4
    I like the emotion behind the words. Keep it alive.
  • eulussoeulusso Posts: 50
    millions of ants, each one doing what she has to, no one knows about the whole, not even the queen, she is busy in her "room" making more eggs.

    you
  • eulussoeulusso Posts: 50
    ...you are so right justam, I believe this what relation ship is all about, otherwise we would be ants!
    E
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