warm day in October

justam

(I deleted this for my project)

#X.

I have read over this poem several times, and keep coming back to it. It is really, really, good, each paragraph fits so well within itself. I can't explain what i mean, but it's well worth reading and keeping around. #X.

justam

Thanks #X.

It's one of those things that was a feeling that came out rather than something I planned to write down.

C3

wow... I reserve "wow"s for stuff I really like. I loved the examples you chose... it's so simple and so damn effective. I've read it about a dozen times already... great stuff.

catefrances

nice a.m.


tis a warm october day here too. 86F.

Buru

justam wrote:

I'd like to drop a dream into water and
watch it move like food coloring...
see the spot as it dissolves,
moves, until it colors the whole glass

I'd like to feel an idea as it
spreads like perfume through the air
one of those plants in the dark
it catches a nose or two
but you can't see it yet

I'd like to hear a sound that
bounces off a building three blocks away
to land at my window
as clear as day

beautiful poem
I really love the final 4 lines, there is something so dreamy and appealing about them.

justam

Thanks!

chadwick

way bad ass justly.
nicely done.