bonk-bonk

justam

knocked on the head once again
but learning is good, isn't it?
yeah
maybe it could be called curiosity?
that's so much easier to understand
and love
can't have someone without
that intense need to ask
and look
and wonder...
yeah, let's call it
being quite curious
but we won't let it kill anyone

#X.

"but we won't let it kill anyone." Great last line. #X.

justam

Thanks.

Looking at this today, it doesn't seem to express what I was trying to say very well. *shrugs*

Grasshopper

This peice is just hip dude, I don't know any other way way to describe it. It's like the kind of peice you would see on def poetry jam or whatever that Russel simmons poetry gig is called. Really unique from most of the stuff on here. Most of us (myself included people) tend to try too hard to perfect every word and don't let things flow..I just learned alot about my writing from this read.

justam

Thanks grasshopper.

And yet, I actually feel it isn't a very successful attempt at expression because it doesn't flow or rhyme or say much of what I was trying to get across!