If

justam

If you need to
feel free to untie
I don’t want you to cry
I love you, I adore you
it’ll be okay
to untie
I only want you to be happy
don’t worry about me
I want you to feel good
go out and be without care or injury
better that than be sad
I’d rather you were glad
the next time you see me
‘cuz I’ll get there eventually

FinsburyParkCarrots

I can relate to that one. Or, rather, I think I was in the position of the addressee in that poem, and I recognise the voice of the speaker, from about six years ago. I do hope she's okay now. The lady who sounds very much like the speaker of your poem, that is. In fact, I'm sure she is.

jamjam

justam, i really like this one a lot.
and also feel like i can relate to this.
Thank goodness for you and your words.
i'm grateful.

justam

jamjam wrote:

justam, i really like this one a lot.
and also feel like i can relate to this.
Thank goodness for you and your words.
i'm grateful.

This is such a nice thing to say. Thank you.

justam

FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:

I can relate to that one. Or, rather, I think I was in the position of the addressee in that poem, and I recognise the voice of the speaker, from about six years ago. I do hope she's okay now. The lady who sounds very much like the speaker of your poem, that is. In fact, I'm sure she is.