I care

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I care so much that you might give up
I care so much
and I see how
your mind takes you down the dark road
so fast, a few weeks, & you’re already to be gone

why doesn’t it occur
to you
that I don’t have the freedom you do?

You can have a good time without me
and I’m glad
You can go wherever, whenever you want to
and I’m glad
You can be anywhere with anyone
and I’m glad

but I don't have that freedom
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    already should be = all ready :p

    I need to edit !!
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    you know justam sometimes you and i, we inhabit the same spaces. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • KovoKovo Posts: 255
    Haven't had the chance to read anything here for about a week and this was the first I read. Amazing, and I know how you feel.
    I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Thanks kovo. :)
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  • kikigirlkikigirl Posts: 17
    Very nice.
    are we going to the same place? if so, can i come?
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