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Wrecked

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm trying not to take it personally
but I think the water's come in
I've sunk a bit since
I realized there's no room for me
where would I fit?
it's hard to dream and sing
when
you realize that's all it is
I don't want to be on the edge
at the margin
a shadow
I wanted to be real
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  • WickedJeremyWickedJeremy Posts: 229
    justam wrote:
    I'm trying not to take it personally
    but I think the water's come in
    I've sunk a bit since
    I realized there's no room for me
    where would I fit?
    it's hard to dream and sing
    when
    you realize that's all it is
    I don't want to be on the edge
    at the margin
    a shadow
    I wanted to be real
    The edge is better than the boring middle. Just think how it must be in the ditch! Uh-oh, I'm plagiarizing Neil Young now.
    -Jeremy
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    WickedJeremy wrote:
    The edge is better than the boring middle. Just think how it must be in the ditch! Uh-oh, I'm plagiarizing Neil Young now.

    That is probably true about many things, but not in this case I think.
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  • memememe Posts: 4,695
    Beautiful, and close to home as usual :)
    ... and the will to show I will always be better than before.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    meme wrote:
    Beautiful, and close to home as usual :)

    Thanks meme. :)
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