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Damn that brown-eyed man

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I've accepted that I'd probably still love him
even though he still owes me an apology
and it seems certain I won't be getting one
any time soon
or
ever
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  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    I love your poem. Simple with powerful words
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    a poet wrote:
    I love your poem. Simple with powerful words

    Thank you! :)
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    The Indifferent One wrote:
    I liked it too. 8-)

    :D
    I'm glad.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Sheesh! Damn that brown-eyed man! :D Short and to the point. I enjoyed it.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    Sheesh! Damn that brown-eyed man! :D Short and to the point. I enjoyed it.

    Yay! :D
    extra words for the rule!
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