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justam

He always wanted more
Her lovely one was insatiable
He needed so much

If she slept too late in the morning, he felt slighted
shouldn’t she be writing more poetry?
shouldn’t she be petting him?
(not that she didn’t want to, but sometimes she needed to rest)
just to be quiet
and feel her heart

But, she did love to snuggle with him
and whisper silly things to him
maybe he should just join her in bed when she overslept?

catefrances

for some strange reason i read this as 'he' being a dog.

justam

catefrances wrote:

for some strange reason i read this as 'he' being a dog.

I could see how you might think that, (because I used the word petting) but that was not my intention. It's more about how when two people are in love they just want a lot of attention and warmth from each other.

Mystique420

justam wrote:

I could see how you might think that, (because I used the word petting) but that was not my intention. It's more about how when two people are in love they just want a lot of attention and warmth from each other.

'tis true,... 'tis also something i lack :(

justam

Mystique420 wrote:

'tis true,... 'tis also something i lack :(

I'm not sure what you're responding to with this remark Mystique. Sorry.

Mystique420

justam wrote:

I'm not sure what you're responding to with this remark Mystique. Sorry.

no worries n no need to be sorry,... i was referring to your poem that's all,.. i was wishing for some huggin' n snugglin',... instead it's been a long 48 hours..
think i should lay off the caffeine??? maybe the nicotine?? is it the weed??