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You make me wonder

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Could you show me what it feels like to be happily in love?
Can you do it?
For me?
I’d like to know it sometime
and feel it as my own
I think I’ve outgrown torturous love
so I’d like to know another kind
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  • memememe Posts: 4,695
    I love it.
    Try and write one I won't like, will ya?

    :p
    ... and the will to show I will always be better than before.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    meme,

    that's a very sweet thing to say! :D
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    All There Is To Seeing

    Sometimes, an evening comes to kiss the mesa
    near the Chuska range, blushing in colors
    not possible for any place, but in the sky.

    There is the passion of pink, mixed purple, mixed orange...
    laying down on a bent knee of rock, like a blanket,
    He made perfect, for Her.

    Father Sky believes his Mother Earth. She turns for him.
    She rolls over, and is made as dark as he is,
    like a sigh. The snap in color is his pride.

    It all happens, soundless. Save our watching souls.
    There is nothing, but to feel our ache...
    Our kinship, when we reel.




    driving home, last sunday, we saw an amazing sunset... my 7 year old said that father sky was blushing because mother earth loved him so much it embarassed him. i'm sorry, but that's some seriously intense shit to be coming out the mouth of a 7 year old, wouldn't you say? your question, justam, called that occasion to mind. there is "happily in love"... notice the "happily" comes before the "in love"? ;) it's a long-assed row to hoe if you've been in a tortured state for very long... but it's fun as hell if you've got the right mindset and don't crave instant gratification too much. much luck in your quest. i have my fingers crossed for you :D
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    PastaNazi wrote:
    All There Is To Seeing

    Sometimes, an evening comes to kiss the mesa
    near the Chuska range, blushing in colors
    not possible for any place, but in the sky.

    There is the passion of pink, mixed purple, mixed orange...
    laying down on a bent knee of rock, like a blanket,
    He made perfect, for Her.

    Father Sky believes his Mother Earth. She turns for him.
    She rolls over, and is made as dark as he is,
    like a sigh. The snap in color is his pride.

    It all happens, soundless. Save our watching souls.
    There is nothing, but to feel our ache...
    Our kinship, when we reel.

    'like he made perfect, for Her.'

    this is real. thank you ms. pn :p
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    justam wrote:
    Could you show me what it feels like to be happily in love?
    Can you do it?
    For me?
    I’d like to know it sometime
    and feel it as my own
    I think I’ve outgrown torturous love
    so I’d like to know another kind

    i feel some of these sentiments, mr j

    i've been neglecting myself for too long now

    time to be in love,
    without the torture and without the pain.

    thanks for sharing.
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    olderman wrote:
    i feel some of these sentiments, mr j

    i've been neglecting myself for too long now

    time to be in love,
    without the torture and without the pain.

    thanks for sharing.

    Yeah, definitely without the torture. :)
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    mr j?????
    are you a guy? i''m shocked!!
    i thought you were a mother..???/
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    jamjam wrote:
    mr j?????
    are you a guy? i''m shocked!!
    i thought you were a mother..???/

    I'm a woman, not a man.
    People just make that mistake because of my user name.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    PastaNazi wrote:
    All There Is To Seeing

    Sometimes, an evening comes to kiss the mesa
    near the Chuska range, blushing in colors
    not possible for any place, but in the sky.

    There is the passion of pink, mixed purple, mixed orange...
    laying down on a bent knee of rock, like a blanket,
    He made perfect, for Her.

    Father Sky believes his Mother Earth. She turns for him.
    She rolls over, and is made as dark as he is,
    like a sigh. The snap in color is his pride.

    It all happens, soundless. Save our watching souls.
    There is nothing, but to feel our ache...
    Our kinship, when we reel.




    driving home, last sunday, we saw an amazing sunset... my 7 year old said that father sky was blushing because mother earth loved him so much it embarassed him. i'm sorry, but that's some seriously intense shit to be coming out the mouth of a 7 year old, wouldn't you say? your question, justam, called that occasion to mind. there is "happily in love"... notice the "happily" comes before the "in love"? ;) it's a long-assed row to hoe if you've been in a tortured state for very long... but it's fun as hell if you've got the right mindset and don't crave instant gratification too much. much luck in your quest. i have my fingers crossed for you :D

    You seven year old does sound quite astute!

    I like your words too. :)
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    it's hard to tell with some user names, but i always thought you were a female, esp. with the way you write, ok all is well thanks for clearing that up. :D
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    jamjam wrote:
    it's hard to tell with some user names, but i always thought you were a female, esp. with the way you write, ok all is well thanks for clearing that up. :D

    :D Don't you feel proud for noticing that? :D
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    proud.. ? no, i just felt a bit confused, that's all.
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    justam wrote:
    Could you show me what it feels like to be happily in love?
    Can you do it?
    For me?
    I’d like to know it sometime
    and feel it as my own
    I think I’ve outgrown torturous love
    so I’d like to know another kind


    i hope for your sake you do,... you deserve it!!!
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Dowecheatemnhow wrote:
    i hope for your sake you do,... you deserve it!!!

    That's a nice thing to say! :)
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I really enjoyed this one, good read! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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