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It surprised her

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It surprised her
the way he relied on magic
on chance
on happy co-incidence
she didn’t expect that
she was always so practical
solid
(during the day at least!)
but she thought he must know something
after all, he had found her
and that was a start
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i like it. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    catefrances wrote:
    i like it. :)

    :)
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  • kike_gottkike_gott Posts: 63
    cool, they found each other and they complete each other like yin & yang, i like your songs, cause i always find myself (or a part of myself) in them, maybe we're riding the same wave...? :) anyways, in this one i'm the loose wheel
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    catefrances wrote:
    i like it. :)

    ditto...It's all in those last two lines :)
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
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