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My lovely friend

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
My lovely friend
stay safe and true
don't be sad or blue
time will pass, it always does
and then I'll be smiling and kissing you
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Post edited by Unknown User on

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  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    short, but very sweet....
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    ((((((((((justam))))))))))
    such as beauty...~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    a*........jeeeeeeeeeeeez give me back edit button pleeeeeeeeeez....~


    i have to quit posting, here...~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    eddie's Tone rocks wrote:
    a*........jeeeeeeeeeeeez i want my MTV~


    i will never post again/quote]

    how bout that edit?

    btw etr, my carefully previewed post, is all in the spirit of fun. but you know that, i am sure.
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Do it. Just hit the quote button and change this message. It's the only way to edit. Snip, snap, quackin' flap. Took hold of ms mess last night and now it's early in the AM.. did you ever wish the wish we all wish?

    kill the messenger! leave a good looking corpse!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i apologize for my posts on this thread. my attempt at being clever was bad and i admit my bad. bad, bad, bad.. sorry Justam . btw, your short poem is very sweet. thank you
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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