On my blanket

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
On my blanket
I was aware of the leaves
and the breeze
and the grass underneath

I tried to decide
which way to sway
in my attempt to weigh
the sides

fear, doubt, worry?
a vision of something else?
a new place to be?
another approach in the days to come?

and
I decided
I didn’t spend years learning to be brave
just so I could play old songs
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  • " I was aware of the leaves" Thats my favorite line in your poem~ So different then anything I've read~
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Thanks! :)
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  • If all else fails, make shapes out of the clouds.
    Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
    Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
    (Wolfmother)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Grand Rapids 2006
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