I used to worry

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I used to worry

maybe if I’d written more love letters
like the one that made you blush
the one that stopped your breath
you’d have believed that I loved you

maybe if I’d been less hidden
less composed
less afraid that you’d run
I could have poured it all out

but it’s too late to worry about it
it’s done
and it’s been done for so many years
that I have to let it go
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    justam wrote:
    I used to worry

    maybe if I’d written more love letters
    like the one that made you blush
    the one that stopped your breath
    you’d have believed that I loved you

    maybe if I’d been less hidden
    less composed
    less afraid that you’d run
    I could have poured it all out

    but it’s too late to worry about it
    it’s done
    and it’s been done for so many years
    that I have to let it go
    very well conveyed thoughts...I liked it and the subject matter,
    love always gets em!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Ali wrote:
    very well conveyed thoughts...I liked it and the subject matter,
    love always gets em!

    Yeah.

    Love always gets me. :D
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  • I hear ya! Nice and simple. It's sad and reflective yet a hint of indifference.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    *sigh*


    been here, done this
    lost my friggin mind in it




    hugs
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    PastaNazi wrote:
    *sigh*


    been here, done this
    lost my friggin mind in it




    hugs

    {{{PastaNazi}}} :)
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  • love this.

    love letters.

    love.
    there is no other way.
    and there never was.
  • Ah, the "what ifs"...it's hard to let go sometimes. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Ah, the "what ifs"...it's hard to let go sometimes. :)

    Now all the "what ifs " floating in my head
    give way to "what is", because that's all I have left
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like this one too.
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