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(And then he said)

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
something more than she could have hoped for
something even better
and she knew why she loved him
once again he would surprise her
trying harder than the others
and it filled her with wonder

she was willing to be brave
not expecting anything
no wishes, no strings
and here he says something better
and it made her cry
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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    hey, long time no see.

    i like this!
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Hi there violet ray! Where have you been? It's nice to see you too! :)
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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    a couple of new, different boards for the most part

    :)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    violet ray wrote:
    a couple of new, different boards for the most part

    :)

    Oh.
    I hope you and your son are doing well. :)
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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    we're good, am..thanks. and you and your family?
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    violet ray wrote:
    we're good, am..thanks. and you and your family?

    We narrowly avoided a trip to the hospital Monday for someone's asthma, but everyone's healthy again. :)
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  • decides2dreamdecides2dream Posts: 14,977
    justam wrote:
    something more than she could have hoped for
    something even better
    and she knew why she loved him
    once again he would surprise her
    trying harder than the others
    and it filled her with wonder

    she was willing to be brave
    not expecting anything
    no wishes, no strings
    and here he says something better
    and it made her cry


    i always enjoy your phrasing.

    ahhhhh.....'and she knew why she loved him'...that is always the key eh? so simple, but true, and oftentimes, one loses sight of this, or maybe faith? in this.

    well done.
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    decides2dream wrote:
    i always enjoy your phrasing.

    ahhhhh.....'and she knew why she loved him'...that is always the key eh? so simple, but true, and oftentimes, one loses sight of this, or maybe faith? in this.

    well done.

    Thanks dear! :)

    (I was inspired.)
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    This was is very sweet and hopeful, I enjoyed it. :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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