5 minutes to cover you up

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited May 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
In a five minutes or so
I want to pour out some love
I have this need to pour myself over you
like a blanket of liquid
or a coating of electric warmth
maybe I’ll float over there?
somehow?
and heat you up?
so you feel good
and full
like a glowing orb
can I try it?
I’ll pour out this love
all over you
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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I need to edit that first line!!! :p

    It should be "In five minutes or so" without that extra 'a'!! :D
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  • imspinnin
    imspinnin Posts: 933
    justam wrote:
    I need to edit that first line!!! :p

    It should be "In five minutes or so" without that extra 'a'!! :D
    ahhh..don't sweat it, just makes it sound like you have a European accent:D

    very nice by the way...
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    imspinnin wrote:
    ahhh..don't sweat it, just makes it sound like you have a European accent:D

    very nice by the way...

    LOL! Thanks. :)
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