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All in One

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
All in One

So I was noticing this evening
the real fact
the simple fact
that I’ve never found everything in one person before

Wouldn’t that be somethin’ ?
something to be excited about ?!
if it was true?
wouldn’t that be a treasure unheard of?

yes, it could be!!
almost too much to imagine
but I was thinking 'bout it
and it made me quite happy
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    sounds good to me..it would make me happy too :)
  • UpHereInMyTree500UpHereInMyTree500 Posts: 1,772
    to find everything in one person...now that would make anyone happy!
    Wave came crashing...
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    One stop shopping, can't beat that! :D:D;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
    I guess I'll say,

    Hail, Hail to the lucky ones...

    I am one of them--

    Refer to those in love :P

    All I need :D
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I love the hail, hail reference

    good comparion IMO
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
    That is one to be untouched. Bolt of lightening. wait to see.
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    One stop shopping, can't beat that! :D:D;)


    can it be put any better?.... well, maybe: "Hail, Hail the lucky ones.." ;)
    change begins with discontent.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I am happy for those who have found that! Wish we all could! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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