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A happy surprise

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I feel so much better now
less heavy
like an open faucet
or a flowing waterfall
without that collar of worry

and my forehead feels broader somehow
although I have no idea why that should be

I just didn’t realize
I can’t win ‘em all
I can’t change everyone
but at least I can change myself
and other people who want to reshape
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  • wolfbearwolfbear Posts: 3,965
    Very nice.
    "I'd rather be with an animal." "Those that can be trusted can change their mind." "The in between is mine." "If I don't lose control, explore and not explode, a preternatural other plane with the power to maintain." "Yeh this is living." "Life is what you make it."
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    This one is very inspirational...as coming from you...showing your strengths.:)
    You always come through with good pieces,just am:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Ali wrote:
    This one is very inspirational...as coming from you...showing your strengths.:)
    You always come through with good pieces,just am:)

    Thanks Ali :)
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Yeah, justam, you never cease to make me smile. Thank you! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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