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Magic tree

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Take a nap any day and
you can see your very own angel
soft and incandescent
flowing brown curls like a halo
wings and clean bare feet and hands
the protection you need if
you sit under that magic tree
that reminds you to wish for a view
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I enjoyed this JA

    thanks
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

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    Because I know how much time that wastes
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  • Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
    Nice - very sweet and comforting yet gives the impression of a dreamlike state
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
  • binauralmanbinauralman Posts: 83
    very comforting, thanks.. that made me smile ;)~!
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  • PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
    Lovely. :)
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Astral Star wrote:
    Nice - very sweet and comforting yet gives the impression of a dreamlike state

    That's what my intention was. :)
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  • pickupyourwillpickupyourwill Posts: 3,135
    justam wrote:
    Take a nap any day and
    you can see your very own angel
    soft and incandescent
    flowing brown curls like a halo
    wings and clean bare feet and hands
    the protection you need if
    you sit under that magic tree
    that reminds you to wish for a view

    very sweet :) you always seem to look on the bright side of life. naps rule! heard something on the radio today that some businesses in France are seriously considering paying their employees to nap so that the quality of their work may improve. Niiice :) I hope its an idea that catches on.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    pickupyourwill wrote:
    very sweet :) you always seem to look on the bright side of life. naps rule! heard something on the radio today that some businesses in France are seriously considering paying their employees to nap so that the quality of their work may improve. Niiice :) I hope its an idea that catches on.

    I think work would improve, and probably marriages too. :)
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  • pickupyourwillpickupyourwill Posts: 3,135
    edited May 2009
    justam wrote:
    I think work would improve, and probably marriages too. :)

    "sleep is sacred" Cheers to naps!---they're very underrated--and not only reserved for children and the lazies like myself :D
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    pickupyourwill wrote:
    haha :) you should chat with my husband sometime. he never gets enough sleep, and if i try and go for a nap in my "off time" he chalks it up to "depression". "sleep is sacred", I tell him. Yep, he's a stubborn one alright. Cheers to naps!---they're very underrated--and not only reserved for children and the lazies like myself :D

    People in hot countries have the right idea with Siestas. :)
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