Morning vision

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
There was warm water
and steamy tiles
and foaming white soap
and a person pretending to sleep
there was a woman in a grey cotton jumper
kneeling on a tub step
she had a cloth in her hand
and a soft look
she lifted one arm and then the other
and as she lathered between the fingers
someone chuckled softly
(and that’s when I woke up!!)
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Comments

  • CodeRiotCodeRiot Posts: 115
    creepy....
    I tried to be a better me
    In the end I looked like the rest of them.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    CodeRiot wrote:
    creepy....

    Yeah, well it didn't feel like a nightmare at the time, but once I looked at the symbols in it, it DID seem to be a warning about the emotional dynamic between these two people.
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    it is wholly unique....
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