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justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
No one knows
what it cost me
that day I found out
found out he c o l l e c t e d hearts

No one knows
what it cost me
to swallow my disappointment
and love him anyway

it cost me my heart
it cost me my freedom
it cost me my trust in love
I can't take the chance on trusting you
because I don't want to find out

i don't want to find out
it's a game to you too
I think I'd die if it happened again
I'd just explode on the spot

like an over-filled water balloon
I'd burst into a million pieces on the driveway
I'd rather love you
and not find out
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Comments

  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    You made me cry a little (well, almost)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    as the matter of fact, I just posted something in the thread "i wanna be your naught boy" that could have nhad the same title, but it's about something totally different hough :)

    but thnaks for posting this, is what i really wanted to say :p
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Jamal wrote:
    as the matter of fact, I just posted something in the thread "i wanna be your naught boy" that could have nhad the same title, but it's about something totally different hough :)

    but thnaks for posting this, is what i really wanted to say :p
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    sorry, i was going to reply with something,
    changed my mind, edited it....did not expect that.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Oh, justam!!! This is so sad and very awesome, IMHO! SO human, real. I love how you can capture these feelings and give them voice. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    Oh, justam!!! This is so sad and very awesome, IMHO! SO human, real. I love how you can capture these feelings and give them voice. :)

    Thanks dear!! *kisses for B.E.*
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Lie to me, I promise... I'll believe.... Lie to me... just please don't leave


    i can so relate to this, it's not even funny
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    PastaNazi wrote:
    Lie to me, I promise... I'll believe.... Lie to me... just please don't leave


    i can so relate to this, it's not even funny

    Trust and love and disillusionment...it's never funny when it comes up.
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    justam wrote:
    Trust and love and disillusionment...it's never funny when it comes up.


    i'm telling you girl, it's a fucking bitch...

    and they wonder why i'm so guarded
    and then they break up with me cuz i'm so guarded
    so i get more guarded and less guarded
    and well... then everyone just thinks i'm fucking nuts


    on a lighter note...

    my girlfriend played "ENIGMA" in my living room the other day...
    i didn't puke, so that was cool
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